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Exhale

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July 1, 2015
Exhale by IndigoSkyes is "gorgeous" as the suggester writes. This small piece of prose speaks of a deep appreciation for all the ways beauty manifests itself.
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I love the marks that a woman’s clothes leave on her body. I love the red indents and the proof of a long day before she even opens her mouth.

Tight socks circumventing ankle bones. A watch cutting a bit too tightly around a pulse. The alluringly simple bra straps; wire pressing up into the impossibly soft undersides of breasts; the cryptic clasp nestled between shoulder blades. The imprint of lace and elastic on the taut tender tendon of the inner thigh. The geography of jeans around the hips and trailing along the legs like railroad tracks. The line on her cheek from when she fell asleep on the bus home.

I love the luxurious sigh when it all puddles to the floor, shedding this artificial skin. Remnants of weariness leave whispers on the body.

And after all she has been through, she still comes to me and allows me to trace these whispers with my fingertips, eyes, lips. She doesn't cover herself and doesn't hide and lets me in.

We leave the lights on.
I wrote this a really long time ago, but I've always liked it.
© 2014 - 2024 IndigoSkyes
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hopeburnsblue's avatar
Third time reading this and I love it!