Unedited crap. Please help me edit it!
Plot: this was originally going to be a longer story, but I decided against it a.k.a., I was majorly lazy and didn't write it. But the general plot is that the main character gave up their life of being an angel (like in City of Angels
) for this woman. He decides to propose to her and flies up into space to get a star instead of a diamond for her ring. Erm, yeah.
: Do you like it? That's really the most important question for me here. Should I add to it and explain the angel thing in the story? Should I make it longer/shorter? More description? Less? Anything else you want to critique on? Etc.