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What a Poem Should Be

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A poem should be new,
New as "spring" is not.
It should be incandescent and alive,
Spinning and mad as a Hatter.
It should be chalkboard dreams
And tea cup wishes that
Contain tears that salt your Earl Gray.
It should be an umbrella smile
With glittering jump rope arms.
It should be groaning with delicious, sibilant words
Like decadence, luxurious, lucious.
It should roll and tumble
Like a silvery-moon-pulled tide
Foam whispering, breathing, breaking
Along a pebbled beach of words.
An exercise we did in class the other day. I kind of just wrote it off the top of my head in, like, two minutes or something. I think it's fairly decent.

:iconthewrittenrevolution:: I tried this as more tradtional. Is the imagery overdone? Anything I could've added/take out?
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I like the imagery, especially "tears that salt your Earl Grey." This is a beautiful little piece.